I just deleted chapter 2. I realized that i am missing a VERY important part of the story. sorry for any problems:) I hope that the new chapter two will be a little better
@ElisabethPillay I was actually thinking about that. I was using my AMAZING science skills (ninth grade skills), and remembered about cross genetics. I thought that maybe Jacob's human genes and Nessie's human genes could cross, creating a human child. Or maybe werevamp...There r tons of possiblilites, thats why I wanted opinions from everyone who can give them!
it would b wondreful if nessie had a child. i'm curious to what you get when you cross a vampire with a werewolf/shapeshifter (or whatever the heck jake is). lol!