lordbyronwascool

Hi Aastha. Thanks a lot for reading my book. I'd love to know your feedback on it ♥️♥️♥️♥️

lordbyronwascool

Thanks a lot . I agree with your point. Actually the real French classic this story is inspired from is set in 18th century and the protagonist is in prison for 20 years and then he finds a treasure on an island and gets on with pirates to do his bidding and then returns as the richest man in France. I thought of a way to adapt the treasure track to modern India, but then thought start-up entrepreneurs who create a certain app or website like Facebook, Whatsapp have that sort of rags to riches story and also I wanted the wealth to be a product of his intelligence and drive rather than treasure. But your point is absolutely correct and valid.
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Aasthabe

@lordbyronwascool your story is quiet interesting, characters are messy and I like it. The only thing that kind of bothered me was sahas /aditya becoming a trillionaire in 5 years , that's too unrealistic but overall I am excited to read further.
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thefreebird_05

Hey sweetie, just saw your votes on my book Spotlight. Just wanted to let you know how glad I am for them. I hope you are liking the book❤️

Aasthabe

@thefreebird_05  i am loving the book and aaryan and myra's banters .Really excited to read your other books as well 
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