@ShiningHatsya Nice to meet you. Right now I am on vacation and won't be back on for a while. I'll critique your book when I come back.
Take care
~Suzuka
Hello, I am one of @Shibuya_Tomoshi's Rookie 2 readers, and my series is at the 2nd half. I am openly allowing my 1st 13 episodes for critique, as recommended by her.