AbbieTaylor

Thank you, I will try to use your tips but i'm kinda new to this and quite young :) thanks for the tips though, and i will try to soon :) thanks again :D

freudylove

I like your book, upload soon?
          Also, I have some tips:
          Always check your writing
          Make sure that you can read it; otherwise people apart from you won't
          When checking, read as though you are someone else
          New line when speaking
          Always Caps when names, places or starts of sentences.
          Otherwise. Because. On the other hand. You should use different types of starts for sentences, so it doesn't get annoying. Upload soon