Mahariposa

OK thannks I will try my best to continue and Finnish my story "love is so divine and I want to know your name in Facebook because I want to be your friend?

Abdiel_88

@honeybunchgirl09 
            
            Don't try. Do it, honeybunchgirl09!
            
            If you're interested in a story similar to yours, try Paulo Coelho's "By the River Piedra I Sat Down and Wept." The approach and focus are different, but it may be able to help you give a better depth and direction to your story.
            
            I'll think about it. For now, I'll reserve the right to privacy.
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Mahariposa

Hi Abdiel_88 I hope you understand why I wrote a story titled love is so divine and that is my first story and I want to expressed my thought and feelings and I created this not to  hurt some feeling I just create this to have a survey to a reader what he or she feels and thank you for your consideration ^_^

Abdiel_88

@honeybunchgirl09 
            
            Hi honeybunch,
            
            I do understand about having the need to express your thoughts and feelings. I do that on a regular basis! :)
            
            As writers, we have the power to incite emotions in readers. Through our written works, we can make readers feel sad, angry or happy. You'd be surprised at how individuals react differently to what you've written. The best response I've had so far is when they feel blessed with what they have read. We just need to tread carefully about what we write about, and we need to purify our intentions whenever we write. The consequences sometimes just catch us by surprise, and we'll need to face them when they do.
            
            Don't worry about me feeling upset. If anything, I'm glad you replied rather than ignored my comment.
            
            Do you intend to continue and finish 'Love is so divine'? As a reader, I really am interested about where you're going to take the story.
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