VARHARARM

hay i just read your story and
           I just have a few suggestions. The first chapter is not properly structured. All the sentences are clumped together and there is no space in between sentences.
          it will be good if you structured it well.., so far good start

AbdulrazakSarman1

@VARHARARM thanks and appreciate it, I guess I have revised it in other websites but here, so I will do that
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