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Eh, so, I read a few chapters in your Freedom Planet fan fiction, The Greatest Story Never Told (Haven't had time to read the rest of it, haha). And I thought it was pretty cool how you did good, and I also noticed that our characters had the 'working for the press' thing in common, though mine was a Freelance Photographer, and I was wondering, would you like to review what I have so far in mine and give me some feed back?