Abhainn35

I have published a thing.
          	
          	You have likely read the summary and it is exactly as it's said. I'm going to be publishing the same thing onto AO3, which is unfortunately a lot more irritating to upload images onto, so to keep everything balanced, I will be posting two asks a day until I'm completely caught up, which at the time of writing, is the "Nightmare what would you do if your kids are gay" question.
          	
          	This will also be a lot easier now that my one-act play season is over and I can fully focus on work. That's a whole other story that turned very, very negative by the end and I'm glad it's over.

Abhainn35

I have published a thing.
          
          You have likely read the summary and it is exactly as it's said. I'm going to be publishing the same thing onto AO3, which is unfortunately a lot more irritating to upload images onto, so to keep everything balanced, I will be posting two asks a day until I'm completely caught up, which at the time of writing, is the "Nightmare what would you do if your kids are gay" question.
          
          This will also be a lot easier now that my one-act play season is over and I can fully focus on work. That's a whole other story that turned very, very negative by the end and I'm glad it's over.

AlphataleFanatic

Heya pal
          Been a while

AlphataleFanatic

@Abhainn35 Not yet, i still have to figure out how to write the introduction for the human-monster war as I want it to at least be 1000 words and be READABLE
            
            
            Do you have discord per chance? I'd love some tips on how to make an AU (and writing in general)
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Abhainn35

@AlphataleFanatic 
            
            Aww, sorry to hear that. I hope things get better for you soon, but that's nice you're making your own AU! Is that at least going well?
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AlphataleFanatic

@Abhainn35 haven't been feeling the best recently, but im currently trying to make an AU of my own
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AlphataleFanatic

Dormanmu!! I've come to bother.
          
          : D

AlphataleFanatic

@Abhainn35
            Breaking Bad is goated trust
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Abhainn35

@AlphataleFanatic 
            
            I have not, nor have I ever heard of it.
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AlphataleFanatic

@Abhainn35 
            Holy goated 
            
            quick question, have you watched Fixing Good before? 
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Abhainn35

I forgot to post too earlier but I ended up making a blog for the Imperare seires and I'm going to be posting reference sheets and series information over there. At the time of writing, I made Core's and Nightmare's reference sheets. I'm working on Blue's.
           https://www.tumblr.com/imperareofficial?source=share
          
          Yes, I picked up Tumblr again because Twitter is too scary. 

AlphataleFanatic

@Abhainn35 Yippee. Don't stress yourself out too much. I apologize for not being able to say more since i am lacking when it comes to saying things like these fr.
            
            normal. Totally. So cool. very nice.
            
            Depends on what you want to do.
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Abhainn35

@AlphataleFanatic Thank you. I'm mixing other Imperare related art projects with the animation so I don't get burned out. I have one of Epic I'm almost done with. Oh, and Cross's part of the animation looks pretty good!
            
            Well, I walked into a Walmart for the first time in 3 years and immediately got sick, so that's lovely. Other than that, pretty good!
            
            Current word count is 35,585. I could post it sooner, but I want to keep the weekly schedule from before (even though I didn't stick to it that well). Or should I switch it up since there's another big project this time?
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AlphataleFanatic

@Abhainn35 I sea. Hope you don't have a hard time : D
            
            also how you doing 
            
            
            waiting for DWTP month 1(?) or
            2 idk.
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AlphataleFanatic

I will not stop filling up this board with my messages :)))
          
          
          Disillusionment/Disillusioned.
          
          
          'Thanks for everything, I mean it.'
          
          
          
          
          "NO NO NO NO NO NO NO"
          
          
          
          
          
          
          He quickly breaks down the door of his room, disturbing all those asleep. Running downstairs, he takes off, opening the door leading outside their house. He couldn't fail- couldn'tfailcouldn'tfailcouldn'tfailcouldn'tfail couldn'tfailcouldn'tfailcouldn'tfailcouldn'tfail couldn'tfailcouldn'tfailcouldn'tfailcouldn'tfail couldn'tfailcan'tfailcan'tfailcan'tfailcan'tfailcan't failcan'tfailcan'tfailcan'tfail-
          
          
          
          He ran. It was dark, the moonlight shining through as if mocking his efforts. He ran. He ran. He was getting and going faster every step. Each step scorched the asphalt of the road with a footstep, proof of his efforts. 
          
          
          "I need...to go faster...can't..."
          
          
          
          His surroundings warped and distorted. In front of him was a white void, the neighborhood in front of him destroyed from his movement. There was only white, but-
          
          
          
          "...."
          
          
          
          He ran straight to the white void. In the second he stepped "in", a dark shadow loomed behind him. It was the Grim Reaper, Death, wielding a scythe with a grey blade and a metal handle. The boy could see his reflection, as if the shiny metal was mocking him. 
          
          
          
          "You won't make it. You always haven't." Death whispered behind him. 
          
          "But I WILL."
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          The alarm clock rings, waking him up. 
          
          
          
          "It was a dream. But even in that dream,   '  ."
          
          
          
          

AlphataleFanatic

@Abhainn35 Can I post my draft in one of the stories I'm making? (I'm bad at writing) Give me ur opinion after reading it :))) 
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          Sounds of blades clashing can be heard in the distance, each one crashing against each other with unwavering ferocity. Arrows fly over the horizon, carrying the strength of those who shot them. Horses neigh, with the ones steering them riding like a horseman of death. 
          
          "FOR TENEBRIS!!!" A horseman shouts, voice filled with vigor. Seemingly acting as their commander, he points his sword at the enemy, his fellow comrades following suit. The flag bearers in the rear thrust the flag into the ground, firmly cementing its place. 
          
          Just then, a myriad of arrows fly through the battlefield, each one hitting his comrades in the head, killing them immediately. Enraged, the horseman sets out to find the one who shot them, riding past their enemies and slaying them, his sword cleaving off their heads in one swing. Soon after, he finds himself surrounded, archers preparing to fire their arrows and infantry readying their shields. 
          
          The horseman looks around, never getting off his beloved horse. With a menacing smirk, he unsheathes his second sword, this act earning him the center of attention. Wielding two blades while riding a horse is extraordinarily difficult, much less using it properly to kill those who oppose them. But this man...no, he is no ordinary. That was the judgment his enemies made of him as he rushes into battle, prepared to die. 
          
          "If I am going down...I will at least tell you my name. I am a Knight, HECTOR BASILÉ THE SECOND!!!!" Hector shouts, riding towards his death honorably. 
          
          

AlphataleFanatic

@Abhainn35 It's okay, I'M STILL WAITING-
            
            Nah that was just a story for fun, discontinued unless I get some more ideas. Writing consistently is something I can't and don't do as it is way too hard (and annoying) to come up with ideas, even more so when paired with my nature. But thanks for ze feedback though! 
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Abhainn35

@AlphataleFanatic 
            Apologies for the late response, I got caught up doing art and animation yesterday. 
            
            I liked that a lot! You did a good job with the descriptions in particular. They were vivid and did a good job illustrating the scene. Is this an original story you're planning to publish as an actual book or just online? Or neither? Either way, you're undermining yourself with your abilities. If anything, I noticed a few typos and the extra exclamation signs are unnecessary because ! + CAPITALIZATION already equals loud screaming or sounds.
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AlphataleFanatic

But even this Knight would fall. Soon after, he is hit repeatedly by dozens of arrows, some of them not connecting due to the sheer amount that is already on his body. It was then that his body realized the extent of his injuries, falling off his horse pitifully contrary to his adrenaline filled mind. 
            
            His body hits the ground, shaking his head and making him aware of his current condition. Under his helmet, he grits his teeth, suppressing a scream of agony. In the distance, infantry and cavalry approach, seemingly to finish him off. Unable to move, to do anything, he made his choice. Closing his blood shot eyes, he bites his tongue, killing him instantly. The enemy soon reached him, his armor broken and his body mangled due to the sheer amount of arrows he took. His beloved horse was also shot, laying down beside their master. The soldier who strips them of their equipment sighs, muttering a short prayer for them. 
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            And thus, that is how Hector, the Beheader, fell in battle. 
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AlphataleFanatic

Day 11-12
          
          "It's just a dream. Wake up." A voice whispers, almost mockingly. The dreamscape shattered, the only thing left was a white void as far as the mind can perceive.
          
          "N-no....no...NONONONONO- WHERE AM I?!" A figure shouts in the midst of the hell disguised as nothingness. No one answered. 
          
          They walked and walked and **walked**. But they did not make any progress. If anything, they ended up in the same spot in this white void. Time was non existent, slowly driving the figure to madness as they do not know how much time has passed. It could be days, months, years-
          
          "LET ME OUT!!!!!" Their voice, infected with insanity, shouts out at the white hell. But just like before, no one answered their calls, their pleas and their shouts.
          
          

Abhainn35

Finally finished with stupid driver's ed, can't even describe how much I hated it. I was already terrified of driving and it made it 10 times worse.
          
          But the good news is that I got to draw and read a lot, so I drew some scenes from DWTP since I lost 30 hours of writing. I won't be posting two of the mini comics I drew because they contain significant spoilers, but you can have this one.
          
          https://i.imgur.com/gVWyvtP.jpeg
          
          @Alphatalefanatic You in particular can theorize about it.

AlphataleFanatic

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@Abhainn35 What fun, I sure hope you didn't crash into something on the way. 
            
            Interesting, although I can't understand shit-
            
            So, my theory is that whoever Nightmare is holding hostage, be either Core or someone else, is forced to...  -my understanding is flawed from here- pick one of those two to kill or both of them. The '"them" Nightmare was talking about could or should be the Fallen Stars -Dream, Blue, Ink, etc-. But in true Nightmare fashion, I sincerely doubt he'll even fulfill his part of the "deal". 
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