Navel_Play

 Hey Bro, I hope,Mother Mallika Stories padh k bohot maza aa raha hoga, so please, Chapter 5 and 6 just uploaded, Star button daba k Saare Chapters ko Vote karo, Comments karo, massage bhi kar sakte ho mujhey mere account pe. Happy reading.
          
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Lustrous_Venom

Hey bro thanks for Checking out my story...pls follow me only if you like my content..If no,then tell where i can improve

Lustrous_Venom

@NavelTastesInk Ohk bro... definitely gonna improve it with next part...but the reason was in this navel writing community people used to make short stories so I was making short but as you said I will now turn the story and make it a Lil longer plus follow me if not cuz I have many amazing storie plots like these..
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Abhisahbji

@NavelTastesInk  Bro i like your story but try to make suspense don't make it to quick .... And try to make long story with some twists.... and great story it is 
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