@nimmo77 hey buddy, just checked out your ffs. Honestly consider it as positive criticism. I've read maybe many romantic books and i cannot write but give pretty good reviews.So these are my conclusions:-
•Avoid using emojis, it makes the reader perceive that the story is childish.
•Read ffs with high votes and try to draw out a pattern from the text.
• Make sure there is a specific flow while change of emotions in character.
• Read as much as possible and try to check your work as a reader.
The idea for stories were quite interesting. Hope you'll consider my words.
