aayu_180206
I am sorry for disturbing you can you please read my story about mahabharat time travel.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/391065187?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=aayu_180206
aayu_180206
@AbhyudayaKaramchetu I also can't see narayan to marry a normal girl too so i made her lakshmi only
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aayu_180206
@AbhyudayaKaramchetu Hey here main lead is maha lakshmi herself and due to curse she born in kalyug
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AbhyudayaKaramchetu
@aayu_180206 hey, for some reason can't see someone else with krishna apart from maha laxmi avarars. Something started this emotion recently. I wish you all the best for your story
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Yadav_kanya
Omgg!!! There's no way you just voted on my story 'when phalguni met phalguna' . It's such a big thing for me that my book is getting recognition of an author like u . Thank u so so much !!! :) <3
AbhyudayaKaramchetu
@Yadav_kanya thank you. I'm just like you. Figuring out the narrative of the krishna. Thank you for liking Jaya Samhita too. Looking forward to yours
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Cyra_k
Author i love your book and the way you weave through the words but i have an opinion i apologize in advance if it offends you you have added a new character of niyati yet there is no roll nothing about her personal life if the only things that is to rewrite things she would have done by being in her celestial form she doesn't have to take birth as mortal and if she did shouldn't she have story of herself instead blurring her what about her happiness, her wishes, her feelings, we or i personally cannot connect with her she behaves like a robot every avtar of Almighty that has taken birth atleast we connect with them somehow even yuyutsu as mahadev has a role but the story is only about pandavs and draupadi we don't know about the feelings of the other wives and anything i know it is a Mahabharata but i just thought in retelling of it things would be different.
Sorry i ranted such a long para and if any of my words hurt you i apologize because that is not my intention.
AbhyudayaKaramchetu
@Cyra_k no.. you are right. And soon you will see this. Not so soon. But yes, all this will come out... We are coming to that phase.
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Cyra_k
Hey for me it's only showing 84 chapters?
AbhyudayaKaramchetu
@Cyra_k see after chapter 84 if you can go ahead. Or else probably uninstall and install again. Or you can read in laptop
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Cyra_k
@Cyra_k reads or votes k side mei toh 122 parts show ho rhe but index mei only 84 i don't know what happened maine refresh krke bhi dekha still it's the same:(
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LekhikaNeeti
Hey! I don’t know if you are accepting reading requests or not, but it would be great if you could give my story and chance. Feel free to vote if you enjoy reading it, and do not forget to comment your thoughts and reviews on it. Thank you for your time. I apologise for the inconvenience.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/389263370?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Lotsoflove8
MioneBlack9
Hi, I just wanted to say this story is fantastic. Every morning, the first thing I do after getting up is check to see if there is a notification about the update. I've always been obsessed with Mahabharata, and this rendition of it is unique and tbh out of the world. You are doing amazing work!
MioneBlack9
As said in bhagawad gita-“He is the source of light in all luminous objects. He is beyond the darkness of matter and is unmanifested. He is knowledge, He is the object of knowledge, and He is the goal of knowledge. He is situated in everyone's heart.”
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AbhyudayaKaramchetu
@MioneBlack9 Thank you for the warm words. Means a lot. I would give this to Krishan himself. Probably somewhere some universe this story is happening, therefore I'm writing the same is I always feel.
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Archanaeducation
"➹"when we meet" ➹ UNDER THE MOON LIGHT SERRIES 1" by V_sherri on Wattpad https://www.wattpad.com/story/384492079?utm_source=android&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=V_sherri damnn!! Guys the book talks about the society problems and how a women is burdened yet finds her way to love, that is very patchy. Click to read, the updates are regular!!
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Nardinzo
Hi, Can you please have a look on my new story?
I promise you, it will be sooo different from any long lost sister story you have ever read.
I would love to hear your review.
The update is once per week.
If you like it please vote and comment to know
https://www.wattpad.com/story/368636795?utm_source=android&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=Nardinzo