JosieColeWrites
Hey, I am definitely enjoying your story. I left comments and reactions...and a vote. No need to be self-conscious about it. Keep reading other people's work...and I am sure they will come round and read yours too. The first chapter is promising. I shall be back for more. :D
JosieColeWrites
@Abi-getdown-gail I didn't point it out to worry you or to criticise...only to help you consider your story from a different perspective...I hope that's ok. The Greek gods vs. Vikings really does stand out but you can easily convert it to Nordic mythology...I believe Greek and nordic gods do have equivalents. I will be reading the rest of your story too. Just ran out of time today. You should keep writing if you enjoy it. It can be your thing too...not only your sister's ;)
Abi-getdown-gail
@JosieColeWrites Thanks for pointing out some things I overlooked! Greek gods for instance... Don't know how I missed that! I will be fixing that... lol