AMS1971
I apologize for posting here, but for some reason, Wattpad won't let me respond to private messages. I think it's a glitch in my account or my computer, I'm not sure :/ It is recommended that you read "The Base" bundle by H.M. Wolfe, but to be honest, some of my regular readers had a hard time getting through her books. A few others were fine with them. So, you can give them a try. In the crossover books, I'm actually doing the writing - even the scenes about her characters (with her collaboration) and fleshing them out in ways that she didn't really do in her books. She doesn't put a lot of internal dialogue into her stories that allows the readers to truly get to know the characters on an intimate level. I'm adding that internal dialogue in the Crossover books. Don't misunderstand me, I'm not criticizing her writing style. I just feel that if she wants readers to connect with her character on a deeper level, they need to get to know them through their inner thoughts, which is where characters truly reveal who they are. Anyway, if you want to check out The Base bundle on amazon, the link is below. https://smile.amazon.com/Base-Complete-H-M-Wolfe-ebook/dp/B09348L1FZ
AbigailKnowles
@AMS1971 No need to apologise, I messaged here as I couldn't remember another way to contact you. Have a hard time how? Connecting with the plot and characters on a level? I'll give the bundle a go if it allows me to read your novel. I don't have a problem with any of that, no criticism or misunderstanding here, I prefer your writing style and the plots and descriptions. Thank you, I'll hunt them out.
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