Abigail Panal

Hi! I hope you'll check on my short story, entitled: Well of Fate. It's already completed and has 4 chapters. The story is written in TagLish. If you don't mind, I hope you'll leave some feedbacks as well! Thank you and God bless c: 
          
          http://my.w.tt/UiNb/byjOZ7HzuE