If you can't take criticism then don't be a writer, people piss me off. Please if anyone has criticism or comments on my stories feel free to say them, that's what being a writer is about. If something doesn't make since or sounds stupid I'm happy to know, that way I can change something and make the stories better. I'm not going to block you for telling the truth so you can't read the rest. Clearly if you take the time to waste the day reading my story then you somewhat enjoy it so why would I stop you from reading it just because something you comment. Feel free to say whatever you want.