AceAsteri

Since I am new to Wattpad, I would really love any advice you guys have for me. Also, if anyone would be willing to glance over my new story and comment any advice or criticism I would absolutely love that too (really, please give me some critics, not trolling, but some real hard criticism would help immensely. As a younger writer, I feel that people are often afraid to tell me my work needs edits and I feel like it really stifles my improvement). Thank you!

AceAsteri

Since I am new to Wattpad, I would really love any advice you guys have for me. Also, if anyone would be willing to glance over my new story and comment any advice or criticism I would absolutely love that too (really, please give me some critics, not trolling, but some real hard criticism would help immensely. As a younger writer, I feel that people are often afraid to tell me my work needs edits and I feel like it really stifles my improvement). Thank you!