AceWolf66

@Lalyloveshappiness -- You asked constructive criticism, so I reread your story and here's what I got. I love Noah's character and the story, but there are some gaps regarding Noah's past. Like small things you may or may not notice, like how learned to read or check out books from the library. He's also very mature for a six-year-old, even with all the reading. The story also goes back and forth from being overly descriptive to not descriptive enough. For example, when you described the look of the house to when you described his life with his new family.  The house got described in excess while his time with the family was virtually none existant. All in all,  you built a great character and made a great story, the story has so much potential and I hope you continue writing. If you ever feel like it, I would love for you to give me so constructive criticism on my fanfic so I can improve it. Thanks for taking the time to read my essay of a review ^_^