AceeuuNim

[UPDATE] Stranger Who Chase My Heart will be deleted on Wattpad.
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          	Why?
          	~ Nawala ko po kasi yung story line. Sorry sorry. T_T but, I'm doing a remake of the story. Not sure about the title if yun pa din ba or I will change it. Sorry guys!
          	
          	- ACNoLimitations

Mirokou27

Gud pm AcNoLimitations :)
          First of all I would like to take this opportunity to say thank you for giving me the chance to critic your work :)
          Ok, lets start:
          The title: Very catchy sya although the cover sabi ng isip ko ay korean no nomon :) im not against the kpop fans but medyo nkakasawa n kc sya eh :) try to make it like an object or something that the reader catches its attention :D just like the twilight saga books ;)
          The Characters: Well portraited, pero nghahanap ako ng xfactor, yung characters na sasabihin ko, ay gusto ko tong subaybayan :)
          The Story: Very Smooth, the tone/mood was there, Nice ang simula ng story. Uniqueness lng ang hinahanap ko, just like what I always say to the stories n crinitic ko. Try putting a substance na hindi aakalain ng reader na meron nun ;)
          >suggestions: apply some filipino values na may mapupulot ang mga readers, dont always stick to the kpop idea, make it versitile :)
          So ayun lng i hope nkatulong ako for the future development of your story and im looking forward to your next work ;)

AceeuuNim

@Mirokou27 Thank you :) I appreciate it :)
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