cescawriter
Hey, I read you story. First of all, you should probably put specific trigger warnings in your description, because I wasn't prepared for what you wrote and things like that can really upset people. Second you might want to re-think your description, it doesn't make a lot of sense. I'm not the best person to ask though, it's not the kind of thing I read or write.
cescawriter
@cescamorgan okay so I re read it. It's a little fast paced which makes it hard to follow, but the description is way better and the actual story line is intriguing. Nice work!
cescawriter
@cescamorgan yeah okay, but I'm going to have to skip the trigger part, so I hope it wasn't too long
Acerosewinters
@cescamorgan I did what you suggested and fixed my pov and I noticed three reads on the first chapter. Can you reread my story and tell me what you think?