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@Beyond_Day_Dreaming thanks I'm definitely better at it now but i just write occasionally for fun

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@Beyond_Day_Dreaming well youre doing fantastic considering its not youre first language. I used to write and it was so bad I gave up but yours is much better. Its just small mistakes that I think everyone makes when they first start, its very easy to overlook them when its your own writing vs. Something youre reading

@Beyond_Day_Dreaming do u want me correcting things or no? Cuz I dont want to be rude either, you can always tell me to just go away and feel free to delete my comments too

@Beyond_Day_Dreaming sure no problem, im not the best at writing my own but I'm a pretty good at editing and i love to read