**important**
regarding my story, children of the lab
So I've been thinking about my story for a while, and honestly I'm not feeling completely satisfied about it. I mean, I feel I have good ideas of where it's going to go in the future, but I feel I havent developed my characters very well.
This story was sort of a product of me just spewing out ideas that sounded good as they came, and im satisfied with the plot part of this story!
But as a result of that, I feel I havent taken the time to create deeper emotions between characters and between you, the reader, and how you feel about them.
So I feel like I need to get my ideas out first, and then build from a basic plot to something more meaningful. Dont worry, I'm not going to stop or unpublish this story, but if I decide to do this, I'm planning to finish the story, while keeping it published, then put it under MAJOR editing to get the emotions I want through the story.
Basically I'm laying down a basic plot to work some emotion off of. (Idk if that made any sense)
Honestly I'm proud of this story it's probably the first I've ever put more effort into, instead of just thinking of it. But I feel I can make it better than it is now!
Please, comment what you think about this! I'd appreciate any HONEST feedback about my story. If there's anything you think I could do better, or something to add to the story, please let me know! Id really appreciate it!
(Also maybe feedback on things I could do better as I go along with the story)
~Acid