AclassiGuy

I've just started a new novel that I'm fairly certain you'll enjoy!  You should check it out - it's a relatively quick read just under 3000 words.  See if you enjoy it!

AclassiGuy

So!  I am now working on a NEW BOOK called One (Title subject to change) About a guy who finds himself the last human alive.  Normally, he would feel pretty cruddy about that, and he does, but there is so much more he's worried about, that he really can't be bothered to focus on that.  He is trying to save the last remnants of humanity, I mean after all, he IS singlehandedly responsible for their demise so...
          
          Life could be better.

AclassiGuy

Talk about Long time, eh?  I'm finally going to be getting back into Wattpad, this I promise.  I may, however be redoing most (if not all) of my books eventually and so I ask that you please be patient with me.  For those Skyrim and Dragon Age Inquisition fans, my latest chapter is finally out.  I love you!  DFTBA!

Somber-Flower

<3BEAUTIFUL PERSON AWARD<3 once you get this award, you're supposed to paste it on the wall of eight people who deserve it! If you break this chain nothing will happen, but it's nice to know that someone thinks you're beautiful inside and out :)

Blue-Quill

//Oh golly I just noticed that you are my 50th follower. Thanks!

Blue-Quill

//No no no no it's alright! Glad I could help!
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AclassiGuy

@Blue_Quill thank you for the blind advice!  You very much are a great help!  Sorry for making you critique me.  I am sorry!
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Blue-Quill

//Hmm. I don't see how I can give any advice without knowing the series so Imma give some 'blind advice'.
            
            1) Have you thought about character dynamic? Like their personality and possibly relationship with other people.
            
            2) Are there any unique things that stand out like their eyes dart in a certain location or how they walk cautiously at school?
            
            //I can't really think of any more right now (since I woke up not too long ago) but I hope these can help!
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