Hello, its been a year since I first read your "Fall from grace" story and I must say, its one of the best pieces of fanfiction I have ever read, I like how you managed to make simba a "villain" but he had his own trauma to cause that and it was brilliant. I must also say that you shipping Kion and Vitani had me susprised but you wrote them so well its works so smoothly. One of my favorite parts has to be Mufasas last talk with Kion, Mufasa admitting hes part of the reason Scar came to be while trying to advice Kion was so in character and really great. As someone who also has/had problems kind of similar with my parents, this touched a soft spot. Simba realizing he is the reason Kion is this way sets up a really cool moment for father and son. Defitnetly love the abusive and trauma scenes as these felt personal to me and the way you wrote Matembo and the part of the guard to knows this was such a smart way to keep the truth hidden for a bit longer. The inclusión of the Tree of Life family is a always a plus for me as I love them. I also love how you wrote Kion still having the mark of the guard meaning he is not evil and he is still the leader hence I believe he still has the roar, could be a theory but this is a set up for a emotional realization at the end. Want to say that whatever your doing right now, don't give up and continue living knowing you got us supporting. Thanks for the good read so far, can not wait for the finale, and hope you continue to find joy writing for us. Can't wait for you to update and the big final battle coming up for the pride landers is going to be intense. Remember to stay unbungalible. Much love and support Milo
