Hey so I was reading Bello sisters and I realised something your Yoruba is a bit off I don't mean to be rude and I'm guessing you're not a Yoruba person cause of the name on your profile but it seems like you just search for the meaning of each word and just joined them together in a sentence and that's not really how it works even I as a Yoruba girl found it hard to understand what you were writing untill i read the translation if you have any Yoruba friends or people around you that know the language maybe you could ask them for help instead of using Google or whatever you used for the translation i found the book itself very interesting but the use of Yoruba wasn't just it I'm not expecting you to re edit the book obviously but I just wanted you to take note for future purposes I guess