Adam Lehman

Hello Adam!
          Not sure if you're into funny novels such as Wimpy Kid books?In case that sounds like something you would read, do take a look at my story http://www.wattpad.com/story/20184647-the-imperfect-kid
          thank you

Hi Adam, I'd love you to read my urban fantasy novel, The Blood She Betrayed. I've put the first 3 chapters up on WattPad but the first 12 chapters can be downloaded for free from http://www.clandestinepress.com.au/content/free-12-chapter-teaser-blood-she-betrayed  Would really like to know what you think, Cher from Australia

@AdamLehman7 I think I am about five to seven chapters away from the end.  That gives me some breathing room in case things boil over somewhere. 
          
          Thankfully I have a real editor lined up come September(the goal month I have set to finish) best thing is she knows me personally so she is well aware of my deficiencies, which takes a lot of stress out of it for me. 
          
          When I started writing Ashes my biggest concern was making sure the characters were stable and strong and that I hit on key points throughout the story. So get the base down and flesh it out once that is done.  That has been how I have written things since I can remember.
          
          Autocorrect kept getting me good when I got my first smartphone. For the longest time when I would type 'how' it would assume I mean 'hoe'.   

@MelissaRebhahn wow..... What autocorrect does to my words when I don't reread.... 

@MelissaRebhahn obviously they may be it still is a food book and I can't wait for the hard edit. Lol. And that is because it will be like a whole new chapter or at least parts of a new story. Besides as long as the main characters story is mostly in place you have a very strong base to work upon so it should be easy for you :) Any idea on how close you are to the end? I haven't a clue yet because I have caught up to the newest update. 

@AdamLehman7 I know what you mean.  I just finished chapter twenty-two and I realized that I have been so focused on the main characters I didn't give any real insight to how all of what is going on is affecting the world at large. Making sure it is one of the things I integrate when I go back and do a hard edit.  It's amazing some of the things you don't know you are missing until you are in the last leg of the race. 
          
          I am really glad you are enjoying it despite it's obvious flaws. 

@MelissaRebhahn I still have to go back and vote on the rest lol. On chapter 12 ATM. Only thing that I could even think about critiquing is a slight lack of detail. Or at least parts that could be explined and lengthened but I still think this book is amazing. You're doing a wonderful job.  

Thanks for voting on Ashes of the Dawn chapter four.  ^.^