I plan on being an author when I'm older, so I thought I should make an account and see what other people think of my stories and writing.  I mostly write adventure, or novelize video games (I'm a bit of a nerd.) Anyhow, any reviews of my stories would be appreciated.  Thanks!

Stories in Progress:

The World of Mother- Based on the video game, "Mother", The World of Mother novelizes the story of young Ana White as she goes on a quest to complete a broken song, find her missing mother, and save the earth from invading aliens.  To do this, she uses her Psionic's (psychic powers.) Accompanied by three boys, who are each very different, she wonders if she's out of place.