AdamTatler

so yeah. i just checked back to my wattpad and i forgot to upload some more parts. 
          	during the time i haven't been uploading i have been busy with work, and home life. but I'm starting to get back on my feet. 
          	i have lots of parts to upload but i would like your feedback on what i have written so far so i can make edits for future reads :D 
          	hopefully this time i will stick around a lot longer than last time. 
          	
          	finished college *check* 
          	finished apprenticeship *check*
          	relationships *half check then casually scribbles it out* just joking
          	
          	soo yeah anyway let me know what you think of what i got so far 
          	
          	maybe even compare it to the first version in  first person that has had way more reads and that i completely forgot i had uploaded *shrugs*

AdamTatler

so yeah. i just checked back to my wattpad and i forgot to upload some more parts. 
          during the time i haven't been uploading i have been busy with work, and home life. but I'm starting to get back on my feet. 
          i have lots of parts to upload but i would like your feedback on what i have written so far so i can make edits for future reads :D 
          hopefully this time i will stick around a lot longer than last time. 
          
          finished college *check* 
          finished apprenticeship *check*
          relationships *half check then casually scribbles it out* just joking
          
          soo yeah anyway let me know what you think of what i got so far 
          
          maybe even compare it to the first version in  first person that has had way more reads and that i completely forgot i had uploaded *shrugs*

The-Scrivener

We are so thankful aurora for your  sexy support for I'm a Cyborg's Pet . We could hug you into next week 
          
          RK+Reb 
          ps. All hail the New Mechanical Order. :)

The-Scrivener

@AdamTatler The biological body is an experiment to create a true biological cyborg. One who's DNA runs software. An artificial intelligence hides in this biological body for 17 years. The human immortals typically are totally digital. ( they are really just robots who think they are people).
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AdamTatler

@The-Scrivener it's nice to see that a lot of thought has been put into this 
            Wet ware robot? 
            As in terminator style biomechanics 
            A metal structure under organic structure ? 
            How would human immortals work because the body would degrade and this wouldn't allow them to stay immortal unless there was some method for controlling stem cell reproduction and would keep the cells in the human body from aging
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The-Scrivener

@AdamTatler Yeah there are 5.5-7.5 factions/way of existing. 
            
            1. Human-Cyborgs who have their minds augmented up to super human intelligence. 
            
            2. Transhumans - they are human immortals who have android form. Think people on a chip. 
            
            3.  Artifical Intelligences - they don't get out much. They hide in data centres. The might use machine or robot avatars to interact with people in the real world. Think data center
            
            4. Robots - mobile mini artificial intelligences. More like ex-Machina but generally not android form. For example Mr Jones.
            
            5. Animal cyborg's - brought up to machine intelligence via robot tech ( the Quadraic Alliance )  
            
            5.5 Transhuman Cyborgs. 
            
            In cyborg's daughter, we meet a wetware robot. 
            
            Yeah and humans which makes 6.5/7.5
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AdamTatler

hey there everyone 
          i have made a great decision today. to finally sort out the problems with my story.  the whole points switch is going to be eliminated and made more coherent but more on that to come. 
          there is going to be a rewrite involving a perspective switch as well. all in all this is going to be very exciting as i rewrite what i have and get it set in stone. 
          thank you to all of the people who have read this and decided to stick along for the journey. it means so much to me.
          
          thanks again

AdamTatler

if you are reading this then you are more interesting in the wilderness chronicle 
          i hope you will help me in improving this into the story i know it can be, thanks to everyone who has read it and i hope you like the upcoming story as much as i have enjoyed writing it 
          
          thanks again