arfaat123

Assalam o Alaikum. I hope you don't mind me asking but could you please check out my story and share your honest opinion on it? I'd really really appreciate it. Shower it criticism too. 
          
          Have a beautiful day :)
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/328465949?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=arfaat123&wp_originator=m%2BSBHi9JBo0Lm4%2FyndzgkBH%2BqgXY%2BC9OfUoWhv1Armv3ucB2Npo0z5eEuTM6b%2BP1QxqpmAZ9EBEXxrvcocOcTdDpcgNofJCcbYTLwz4%2BIzTp58FMiCzefiBTudC5xfTa