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Heyyyy,so i wrote a scene and i want you to tell me if you want this to become a book or not..
          	It's a scene where someone who didn't talk all the book talks for the fist time, so tell me what you think
          	
          	
          	
          	"No..no,no,no,no,no" i said while trying to stop the blood.
          	 "Please no i need you, you are the only person who know me, the only one who understands me without me saying a word please" i looked at my team while i jad tears in my eyes "DO SOMETHING" i screamed at them
          	They just looked at me with sad eyes, "im sorry lily, he's gone.."
          	"NO IT'S NOT TRUE,NO"
          	luke went over and hugged me,i never imagined that a round trip can go this bad.
          	
          	It's been a few day's today is the funeral, and i don't know what to do.
          	Before i knew it Luke, Maddie, Cassie and Roby were ar my door waiting for me to come out so we can drive to the funeral.
          	"I can't believe that i need to burry you, Michael you will always be in my heart and i will always remember you,i love you my baby" 
          	I went over to Laura "Im sorry for your loss ms.wodds" i said to her
          	"Thank you, and thank you for loving my son and being with him when i couldn't"
          	
          	After the funeral we all stayed and spent the night in the grave yard, he told us once "Hey guys when i die, can you stay at my grave for the first night, i don't really want to be alone in a place I don't know" I never thought that it would happen this early, we were getting ready to sleep when we heard a little voice say "Thanks for coming and staying for the night" it was Mike, and he was with us like he promised" i will always be with you no. matter. what"...
          	
          	Sooo what did you thought, did you like if you did pls tell if you want this as a book, Have a good day/night/evening/afternoon Byeeee..

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Heyyyy,so i wrote a scene and i want you to tell me if you want this to become a book or not..
          It's a scene where someone who didn't talk all the book talks for the fist time, so tell me what you think
          
          
          
          "No..no,no,no,no,no" i said while trying to stop the blood.
           "Please no i need you, you are the only person who know me, the only one who understands me without me saying a word please" i looked at my team while i jad tears in my eyes "DO SOMETHING" i screamed at them
          They just looked at me with sad eyes, "im sorry lily, he's gone.."
          "NO IT'S NOT TRUE,NO"
          luke went over and hugged me,i never imagined that a round trip can go this bad.
          
          It's been a few day's today is the funeral, and i don't know what to do.
          Before i knew it Luke, Maddie, Cassie and Roby were ar my door waiting for me to come out so we can drive to the funeral.
          "I can't believe that i need to burry you, Michael you will always be in my heart and i will always remember you,i love you my baby" 
          I went over to Laura "Im sorry for your loss ms.wodds" i said to her
          "Thank you, and thank you for loving my son and being with him when i couldn't"
          
          After the funeral we all stayed and spent the night in the grave yard, he told us once "Hey guys when i die, can you stay at my grave for the first night, i don't really want to be alone in a place I don't know" I never thought that it would happen this early, we were getting ready to sleep when we heard a little voice say "Thanks for coming and staying for the night" it was Mike, and he was with us like he promised" i will always be with you no. matter. what"...
          
          Sooo what did you thought, did you like if you did pls tell if you want this as a book, Have a good day/night/evening/afternoon Byeeee..

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For thr clarification EVERYTHING that is written in my books are all from my own mind/head if you want some help or just ask me questions you can go to one of my stories or even here and reach out to me 
          
          Hope you have a good day/night/evening/afternoon 
          Byeeee