doa_imagination
Hi AddisonGrey13
Hope you're having a great day
Sorry I couldn't help but notice that you're interested in the villainess and isekai trop and it so happens to be the theme of my story
I would love if you give my story a go and I'm sure you will like it if not ghen drop a review to correct my mistakes
Bye ♡
https://www.wattpad.com/story/303823899?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=doa_imagination&wp_originator=AnOgI3M8qOPVOqgO%2FFhT1IAYXTXxur4NCJAn33tu6DWqFv6hp7rqePAFcAwpuKNZd%2BnOCi%2FPJZjeGpUxbCWwtKG8NL1gjEAyVuYAj46UxrYp1W0ZK3iXYHalGic1qiI5
AddisonGrey13
@doa_imagination Heyyyy I read your book the plot setting is nice overall but I can seem to understand where the story is going, you making every scene too detailed. My advice to you is first try to make your chapters a little longer and change the way you write cliffhangers. Giving your readers a brief plot setting like the ones in novel updates will give your readers an idea of what they are reading and will allow them to have continued interest in your books. Cheers