Hi there, thank you for the note. I have just finished reading your book and really enjoyed reading it (I finished it within 24 hours lol). I am not really one to provide feedback to all the books I read on Wattpad to be honest as I feel it not really my place to impose my thoughts on another’s creativity. However as you have gone to the effort of messaging me, the only comment I would like to make is that I feel that book captured the feelings of the characters tragedies very well however I sometimes felt that there was so many challenging situations that the different characters were going through that it made it quite difficult to fully immerse myself in Taylor’s story and felt at risk of feeling desensitised to the feelings of loss and pain. I am not sure if that is helpful but figured it might be a thought worth keeping in mind for any future stories. Again, it was a lovely book that I thoroughly enjoyed. Great work!