AdeleBrontey

Realities Part 1 and Part 2 are now complete. Thank you to all those giving the story a chance. Happy Reading :)

bap1906

Thought I'd share this here too for others to find. Thank you so much for your wonderful book full of such poignant prose! It's beautifully written, has authentic characters written with such emotional depth you feel like you really know them as a person and the storyline is uniquely creative without it being outlandish. Truly talented author, can't wait to see what happens next now you've launched us off the cliff and into a fallout free fall....

bap1906

@AdeleBrontey excited for what comes next :)
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AdeleBrontey

@bap1906 Thanks so much, its my first full story so you have no idea how much I appreciate your words! Second booking will be up by the end of the week :)
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ScarlettBlackDaisy

Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better ❤️

AdeleBrontey

Hi there, thank you for the note. I have just finished reading your book and really enjoyed reading it (I finished it within 24 hours lol). I am not really one to provide feedback to all the books I read on Wattpad to be honest as I feel it not really my place to impose my thoughts on another’s creativity. However as you have gone to the effort of messaging me, the only comment I would like to make is that I feel that book captured the feelings of the characters tragedies very well however I sometimes felt that there was so many challenging situations that the different characters were going through that it made it quite difficult to fully immerse myself in Taylor’s story and felt at risk of feeling desensitised to the feelings of loss and pain. I am not sure if that is helpful but figured it might be a thought worth keeping in mind for any future stories. Again, it was a lovely book that I thoroughly enjoyed. Great work! 
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