Oh! haha, I don't really see them as negatives cuz I do see your point! I plan on maybe doing a little more in the future chapters! :) I just need to plan them out so I don't struggle with leaving a few key details behind... I haven't really planned out as much in this story unlike the other one :") With school, I sort of have a hard time with stuff right now..but!! I still appreciate the feedback! Thank you!! <3