Adhale1775

Hi, thanks for the follow and for adding Me And My Evil Cousin to your reading list! I hope you will enjoy my stories, and that you're having a nice day!
          -Jas

Thanks for adding Leeward to your reading list! Your book is slap bang right in the period I’m interested in, I’ll check it out! :) 

If you’re into Hamilton and Laurens in a modern setting check out my collab work with @n0seinabook.  They meet in the military as they did in history, this time basic at Fort Benning. 
          
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Made some edits to the chapter Eros and Ares. Grammar and punctuation, mostly. Nothing plot wise changed. Some word choices. 

Updated the chapter I posted earlier this week (9) to enrich the scenes a bit with more setting description. I tend to be drawn to dialogue and action in reading and therefore in my writing. It often will not hit me til far later how I neglected to set a scene which may not be new to my brain but is to the reader.

Thanks for reading my book dude

Thank you for the follow and for showing interest in "Unveiled"! I hope you will enjoy it!

Hi, thanks for the follow back and also for adding ‘First Impressions’ to your reading list! It means a lot and I hope you enjoy it if you ever decide to read :)