AdhyanthAjay

Hello people! I have edited a few of my chapters, which I felt were a bit inconsistent with the present writing format!! Just thought I should share this.. Peace out!

Zahkriiven

@AdhyanthAjay cough*Relegion*cough xD
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AdhyanthAjay

@E-dubbed Hey!
          
          I read through the first two chapters of your fic. I kinda have an idea of how Dalikr's (hope I spelled it right xD) arc might be.
          
          Well, I usually prefer to think of having a start, a definitive ending or a good lead into a sequel and a turning point in the story that is motivated plot-wise.
          
          So, try forming an ending first and start writing from the start till the mid point. Over there you must try to connect the start and the end in a meaningful and logical way (else there won't be any motivation for a character to achieve the end) while also shifting gears from the turning moment till the end. 
          
          Hope that helps! Good luck with your fic! :)

AchachakFox

You did a great job on the darkbotherhood quest I wish it was like that in the game

AdhyanthAjay

@Fired_biscuist95 Yeah.. Coupled with the worst dialogue choices ever...
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AchachakFox

@AdhyanthAhay  only reason you have to kill is because she tells you to and she said she deserved it
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AdhyanthAjay

@Fired_biscuist95 Thanks a lot.. Yes.. That is exactly what i intended to do. I just felt that there wasn't a motive for Astrid to kill the player character in the games..
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AdhyanthAjay

Hello readers. I will be busy with college work for another week or so.. I'll post the next chapter in a weeks' time. Major plot twists coming up in the next two parts. For everyone who have already played Skryim, I'll be branching out from the original quest soon...