@-Rosel- Heyyyy buddyy! I just read the excerpt and the first part, and it was amazing. Both the excerpt and the first part intrigued me. Your writing style is quite new, than what I usually see in the books. But that's totally fine, everyone has a uniqueness in them. The cover is also really pretty and mysterious. Overall, I'm excited to read further. <3
Though, there's a question, the last paragraph in both the excerpt and the first part goes like it is translated and also summarizes the whole content. What's the point for those last paragraphs? And if this sounded absurd, I'm really sorry but I'm just a curious reader.