Oh my goodness me! It's really great to hear from you. I don't usually write in from the view of a boy, but I like getting out of my comfort zone just to see if I can! Thanks for your comments on the story. Yea, it was a bit nerve racking to have my parents read that bit, and my family and friends, even my teacher, who marked it, that gave me butterflies, but I'm really glad it worked out in the end and that I haven't really gotten any NEGATIVE feedback on it.... I hope you and I can catch up sometime- look me up on facebook! I've probably either got this photo or one of me with an orange wig on... :) . Hope to hear from you again soon, Patty