desconocido2567

Thanks for all of your comments. They really made me smile and gave me efforts to improve the quality of all the chapters. You are amazing bro. I'd like to answer you before, but ff.net doesn’t let that.

Adilek_Vas

@desconocido2567 I meant the other story but focusing on other characters. Like, your first story focuses on EMIYA and Kagetora's relationship development, and another story(if you want) focuses on another female/male Servant. 
            
            For example, write the story about how Cu Chulane and Archer become friends over time in Chaldea. Or a story that focuses on a female servant who gets along with Archer and is attracted to him. It is actually more on your favorite genre, a slice of life, or romantic stories. 
            
            "Do you mean if I plan to pair more characters with Emiya in the future?". 
            Maybe, but only if it will help to push Kagetora and help for her development. This story is already perfect, no need for others. 
            
            "“No matter how bad it is” I don’t know what to think about that… Kidding. I'll always appreciate the support." 
            I mean that I will read this story regardless of the development or what you write. Your writing and storytelling are already my favorite among all writes so far, no one is even near to your level, an exception is Picas, he is a genius. Next year I will start working and will donate to you if you have Patreon etc. So no worries, you are my one of 3 favorite writers so far, and you just started writing, so good luck and try to experiment. For example, your decision to change focus from the EMIYA perspective to Kagetoras was kinda refreshing.
            
            "I really like the character, and I like that you like it in the way that I write it." 
            He has been my favorite since 2016-2017 when I first saw UBW lol.
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desconocido2567

@Adilek_Vas Yeah, I also like to see others person who favors Archer. I really like the character, and I like that you like it in the way that I write it.
            
            “No matter how bad it is” I don’t know what to think about that… Kidding. I'll always appreciate the support. Changing the topic, If you want to learn some language try the one you like the most, 'cause is a long way to learn any language, so it’s better you like what language you learn.
            
            And for the last thing. I wasn’t planning to write something after this story. I mean, for now, finish this story is my only goal. I'm not quite sure about the last thing you asked about pairing ideas. Do you mean if I plan to pair more characters with Emiya in the future?
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Adilek_Vas

@desconocido2567 Also, I do not mean that your fanfiction is bad. I am saying that I will read it regardless of the quality, as the idea is still very interesting to me. In that case, you are way better than Rey de Picas, as he just loves making him too dark or emotionless. Your Archer EMIYA version I love more, so no worry, I am going to be your follower for a long time mate.
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