Hi Adita! Your bio really fascinated me (though can't say I agree with the love for english, though it is my first language haha), and I started reading your story about the "Incorrigible slacker"...pretty good, though you should probably look at the tense changes throughout the sentences (i. e. Going from past to present in the same chapter) but its a desi story and we definitely need more of those! Keep up the good work and I hope you can take some time out to read my story Chennai Wanderers. Thanks!
