Adorkable_Doll

I looooovvvveeee your story. Keep going
          

Love your story keep it up

I like your story, but I think that you should'nt keep saying "you."
          You should just give her a name. That's just my opinion, but I think it may be a bit better. By the way, I love the story other than that.
          Please update soon.
          xx 

Your welcome

Thanks for the fan sweetie pie <3