Adrein_Jaxs

  Someone recently asked me for some advice and I thought I should post the advice I gave where more people can see it! Hope it helps any of you guys! :)
          	
          	  When writing I've noticed (and to me personally) having detail usually depth and "visual" images in stories, but adding to much can drag it out more than necessary.
          	  When it comes to dialogue, well my opinion of my own changes a lot over time, but I guess when writing character's dialogue you really want to focus on capturing what you think that character would sound like as well as say. Also, really focusing on what real people would say in similar situations and such. Basically trying to write dialogue that sounds like how people really converse with each other.

Adrein_Jaxs

Ok, wow. Going back and reading this I noticed my error.
          	  "...having detail usually *adds* depth..."
          	  I don't know why I just realized that...
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Adrein_Jaxs

Hey! Sorry, I hadn't seen your message before. Glad to hear that you've been doing well! I'm doing fine myself. Truthfully I haven't been writing very much for a while but I am hoping to do so now that I've started my summer break! And I've also been thinking about "re-branding" my account. I might change my profile name though, but I plan on making clear that it's still me. But yeah, I'd like to stay in contact! : )

Adrein_Jaxs

  Someone recently asked me for some advice and I thought I should post the advice I gave where more people can see it! Hope it helps any of you guys! :)
          
            When writing I've noticed (and to me personally) having detail usually depth and "visual" images in stories, but adding to much can drag it out more than necessary.
            When it comes to dialogue, well my opinion of my own changes a lot over time, but I guess when writing character's dialogue you really want to focus on capturing what you think that character would sound like as well as say. Also, really focusing on what real people would say in similar situations and such. Basically trying to write dialogue that sounds like how people really converse with each other.

Adrein_Jaxs

Ok, wow. Going back and reading this I noticed my error.
            "...having detail usually *adds* depth..."
            I don't know why I just realized that...
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Adrein_Jaxs

  Just thought I'd apologize for not writing anything in a while...I know I'm always giving excuses but while having to deal with school, I just haven't been in a writing kind of mood. I've been drawing mostly. I am going to try and continue writing stuff not long from now, but in about a mouth I'll be out of school for the summer so I'll be able to write a lot. Anyway, see ya guys!

Adrein_Jaxs

 Hey guys! So, I wanted to ask, I'm trying to make the cover for the new Tokyo Ghoul fanfic I'm going to post, and I was wondering if u, or someone u know on here, can draw digital art, possibly from a hand drawn picture, I'd love to know. Thx :)