@Adrian_659 Hey you are a good writer you don't have to think about that dude AIQuaholic he is not the one writing your story you are and yes he has good talent but so do you in your own way look back at your first story then look at the halo story your making you can see how you improved and you should be proud about that, cause I am proud of you even choosing to make a whole new halo story and and even you inspired me to make my story descriptive because how descriptive yours was. So be proud of yourself but know I am proud of you.
