jostaddy
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Why are you not posting 'Alternative Pain here' I am so glad I read your all work. Trust me I so much enjoyed each of them. I saw how vornulable Vader gets comparing Sith Obi Wan. And I hurt so much when you decided to kill Ahsoka. But everything is just peace of Art. The twisted ghost of Padme and so dumb Vader. I so much loved 'Alternative Pain'. You just understand the characters so much better, I love the way you describe their love and darkness. Keep goin, Thank you❤
AdrijaJ
@ jostaddy I am kind of still confused by warrpad. This will not become my main posting site for fandiction. But thank you very much for your comment. Hlad you kiked AP as well. I am very aware that it is breaking apart Obi-Wan and can imagine many people don't want to read that. And it makes me really happy, that you picked up on how Obi-Wan gets darker while Ankin is doing the opposite. So, they keep contrasting each other.
And yes, Padme. Twisted like Obi-Wan himself warned Vader she would be if he dragged her back into existence.
Really happy you enjoyed it. Some scenes are hard to read. But the Dark Side is not a playground, right ;)