Eric S. Ford

@Rahvin Yes, it's so much better. You've done extremely well with this version. The story feels more... completed y'know. The characters were always well rounded, but now the their stories seem to have a more straighten depth. It's like they came back with their memories cleared up. The story still manages to perfectly describe the emotions and thoughts of the characters. I couldn't get enough of the first version, but this version is literally Commanding me to turn the page.

Aww thanks! I enjoy the green kings too

@Nikole15402 It's a great story. Shikamaru is my favorite character with Maito Guy coming in a close second. So, once I saw that your OC didn't treat the Green Kings like trash I had to see how it developed.

@Rahvin. It's really had to pace myself when I'm reading a book this amazing. It feels good to know that there are more writers out the who don't fear basic instincts.