nxthingtxs33
dude, your book is so fire. Love the concept and writing style. It's honestly impeccable writing. The scene set up & plot is so intriguing & well developed. I am itching to read the rest. Although it doesn't conform to the general CM plot lines & characters that are portrayed in fanfic. your ability to provide more dimension to each individual character is crazy. it's amazing how well you are able to use your experiences to portray seizures too.
nxthingtxs33
@Aeslehc08 Your effort is definitely portrayed. it's easy to tell you've thought through alot of your story, in contrast to just going chapter by chapter. and making things up as u go along. Especially Emily's character. She's often portrayed as this dominant "mommy" figure. which she definitely is, but the younger version of her was a lot softer once the other characters developed a bond w/ her. and i love how you take that into consideration when writing her. I'm glad you can see how appreciated your writing is. And I will continue to read, comment, vote and support your books bc you are so amazing.
Aeslehc08
Oh my god, thank you so much.
This honestly means more to me than you know. I put so much heart into this story — especially the character depth and the medical accuracy — so hearing that it comes through to you is incredible.
I’m really glad the plot and writing style connected with you, even if I’m taking things a little outside the usual CM fanfic lane. And thank you for noticing the seizure portrayal; that part is very personal to me, so your words hit hard in the best way.
Thank you for reading, commenting, and supporting this book. You made my whole day.
