AestheticLivvy

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ChillySnow

@Epicreader16 late but welcome back 
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AestheticLivvy

@Epicreader16 hopefully soon, btw wanna edit for me when its ready?
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AestheticLivvy

Guess who is back
          

ChillySnow

@Epicreader16 late but welcome back 
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AestheticLivvy

@Epicreader16 hopefully soon, btw wanna edit for me when its ready?
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AestheticLivvy

Sorry for not posting War of Desire chapter 12, school has been keeping me to my toes... I plan on publishing it by the end of the week. THANK YOU GUYS FOR 395 READS ON IT MEANS A LOT... stay tuned for more... love you all so much * blows a kiss*

ChillySnow

I read "First Time". I don't really read Fanfictions because I like books to be original but I gave it a chance. It's alright. It has potential. It needs more work though.
          
          I also read "Zombie apocalypse" which I feel is rushed and cliche'. You know what I mean. Typical zombie apocalypse. Teen survivors. Cliche romance. It needs work.
          
          I feel both books could be insanely awesome with the right plot and characters and a slower pace. I hope I didn't insult you or your books that's not my intentions at all and if you feel I was too harsh you can delete this post.
          
          Anyway, I could always give advice and sometimes edit, I guess if you need help on a plot/ storyline or if you already have one and want to work on it.
          
          Have a amazing day whenever you are!

AestheticLivvy

@Winter1Rain Thank you so much for the feedback.  I don't think it was harsh. I asked for people send me feedback about what they think and I got. But when I have an idea for a chapter I write it. I don't intend to rush my books. So if I need help I'll come to you! 
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Okay so I was wondering how everyone was liking my books so far. I would love it if you guys can give me feedback. Anything I should add in the later chapters or just anything that you see wanting to be added. Thank you guys for having the time to read my books. I love you all and have a wonderful summer 

AestheticLivvy

Hey guys sorry I have been not on this app in a long time, I got grounded and had my phone taken away, anyways hope you guys love My first time and I'm trying super duper hard to finish it, btw that book I was telling you about I had already finished chapter five ahhhh so excited...... Have fun guys and happy spring break 

AestheticLivvy

Hey guys just checking in, Anyways I'm going to try to update as best I can, with school and homework and not having time it's hard, I'm currently writing more books too for a creative writing club which is just writing books for fun so i have my plate full, in mean time please be patient with me, and THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH FOR READING MY BOOKS AMD TELLING PEOPLE ABOUT THEM...... LATER