AestheticWeeb801

Heyyoo! Just a quick question for you guys: are there any plot elements currently that need fixing? As of rn, I'm trying to see if there are some inconsistencies with the chronological order of things. Additionally, I might slightly change some elements on chapters 3, 4, and 5. What do you guys think?

ManteigasExoticas

@ AestheticWeeb801  I'd recommend studying the manga and its novels, It's pretty handy 
          	  
          	  And depending on how much you'd like to make things canonicly right, take preference in writing after the manga ended
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47701013a

@AestheticWeeb801 For my side, everything is fine, the plot follows its chronological course and is well explained, I didn't notice any contradictions. If there are details you want to change that might help you later and/or make things as you would like, no problem, go ahead. you are doing great, so don't worry, keep it up, your story is going well!
Balas

47701013a

that's great your initiative . but question, although your original vision of the story might have changed and that's good and should be respected, i wanted to ask if that still means that sora(oc) and Ai will still have their moment. it will still be an Ai x oc? please!!! in the end it's whatever you want and you will still be supported and helped as you have been, don't doubt it or worry about it,  just curious you know. sorry for the inconvenience

47701013a

@AestheticWeeb801 oh I understand, thank you very much! and yes, it's good to have focused the flow of the story so you can give it the best course that you want and you figure without losing the axis of the work in which you have chosen to work and be able to give it your signature and so it fits, I think you were advised to keep informed of the work not to lose details and know how to give it your twists and your route of development, you can do it already you are doing great, let us know anything you need and we will be there to back you up, either with writing or other things and remember to have a good time with this, good luck in everything and thanks again.
Balas

AestheticWeeb801

Yeah yeah! It will still technically be that story. I just wanted to fix some anomalies with the previous chapters like the time some events took. I kinda want it to make sense ya know?
Balas

AestheticWeeb801

Heyyoo! Just a quick question for you guys: are there any plot elements currently that need fixing? As of rn, I'm trying to see if there are some inconsistencies with the chronological order of things. Additionally, I might slightly change some elements on chapters 3, 4, and 5. What do you guys think?

ManteigasExoticas

@ AestheticWeeb801  I'd recommend studying the manga and its novels, It's pretty handy 
            
            And depending on how much you'd like to make things canonicly right, take preference in writing after the manga ended
Balas

47701013a

@AestheticWeeb801 For my side, everything is fine, the plot follows its chronological course and is well explained, I didn't notice any contradictions. If there are details you want to change that might help you later and/or make things as you would like, no problem, go ahead. you are doing great, so don't worry, keep it up, your story is going well!
Balas

47701013a

Hello, I'm sorry if I'm bothering you, but there's something I want to show you. I'm sending you a link to a community forum about Oshi no Ko, and one of the members asked for good fanfics of the series. Well, I don't know if this bothers you or puts pressure on you; if it does, I apologize. But I recommended yours and shared my opinion about it so they could take a look. Of course, I made sure to let them know that you're just starting and that you'll take your own time to develop it, without any pressure or anything. I just thought that even though it has few chapters, you still write well, and I wanted to give others the chance to see your work. If luck is on our side, they might approve of it and follow you too. As you said, your work extends far, haha. I hope I haven't bothered you. Best regards.
          
          https://www.reddit.com/r/OshiNoKo/comments/1fd1xxh/what_are_the_best_oshi_no_ko_fanfictions/

AestheticWeeb801

@47701013a yeahhh i saw!! Tysm!! (^3^)/
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47701013a

Don't worry, if you see in the description of the comment that I posted you will see that I said that you are just starting but progressing in the story andlet them wait patiently  because you want and must do it at your own pace but give it a chance and see if they sign up and they will like it, Someone will surely take it into account and don't worry, I said that I was there to support you like other followers you have and I made that recommendation because he deserves it, you really write well, keep it up.
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AestheticWeeb801

The second half is OUT!! Hope you guys enjoy this one as this took me AGES to come up with. However, I have some rather solemn news: I’m going on indefinite hiatus. With school slowly approaching, I thought that it would be difficult to balance my academics and this. I will try to work on the next one since this chapter will involve Sora’s lore but expect it to take longer to be published. Anyways, that’s all from me! If you have any opinions or questions, y’all know what to do. Cya my fellow ONK/Ai enjoyers <333

47701013a

@AestheticWeeb801 No problem, you have support and help because we want to do it and you are worth it, go ahead with whatever you have to do, good luck and you will always be waited for.
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AestheticWeeb801

@47701013a awww thanks!! I definitely have no intentions of canceling this fanfic since i want it to reach the Japanese side too! Appreciate you and everyone who has come this far!!
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47701013a

@AestheticWeeb801 thank you!! and good luck with your studies and I hope you do great in that and in your daily life remember that if something gets complicated for you you can contact us here to give you a hand with advice or support, please don't forget us and come back when you can, we are supporting and faithfully following your work in the hope of sharing more anecdotes with you and this good story that you created, which although it has only a few chapters has already managed to capture the interest and hearts of many...
            Keep moving forward with patience and perseverance in this and other aspects of your life and don't give up.
            Cheer up and greetings!!
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AestheticWeeb801

Guess who has risen from his grave?? Hi guys! Just to let y’all know that I FINALLY finished the draft for the second half of chapter 5. I’ll try to get the editing and revising done as soon as possible, since I know all of you are looking forward to seeing more Sora x Ai interactions. Look no further as Chapter 5: My Savior (2nd Half) is coming soon! Stay tuned, my fellow Ai/ONK enjoyers!!

47701013a

@AestheticWeeb801 great thanks!! supporting you as always without doubting or abandoning you, we are patiently waiting 
            Greetings and keep going, cheer up!!
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nazuchan1

Well, uh, I just know school or college started for you. So, just know, don’t rush on the second part if in case you making it. Hoping it comes out of its shell.

47701013a

@AestheticWeeb801 Haha, I was also surprised by such a lengthy message, but it was something complicated to explain, and I thought it was the clearest way to respond to your request and offer you help. Normally, I’m less wordy, and as a fun fact, no, I’m not a teacher, but being one is one of my professional options for the future, so in a way, you hit the nail on the head, haha. 
            In any case, I'm glad to have helped you a little and to exchange ideas with you. I'm sure that whatever path you choose in the story will be good because you have great ideas and a good way of presenting them in the narrative. It's also good that you know you have many options, and I hope you're having fun with this process. And you know, there's no rush; one must have patience and understanding since everything has its time and place. Right now, your priority is school, and that's perfectly fine. Just know that I'm still here to support you, so don't worry.  
            In the end, I hope, like others, to be able to help you with something else later on so that you can progress, it doesn't matter if it's in your literary work or another matter, the help is there if you seek it, you already know that.
            Good luck and stay positive with school; don't let it stress you out. In the end, learning and spending time with friends and classmates is always useful, fun, and great! (except for math in my opinion, ugh haha)
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AestheticWeeb801

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@47701013a woah... I didn't expect a whole ass essay from you (in a good way ofc--are you sure you're not an English professor or highschool teacher??) but after reading what you suggested, it turns out we both were thinking the same thing lol!! As of rn, I'm building upon Sora's backstory and lore and how Ai was able to "save" him. As expected, thinking of a creative way to introduce a character's personality, interests, and beliefs is quite difficult and challenging. However, your suggestions really help weigh my options with where the story's direction is gonna go. So thanks for this! Unfortunately, classes are kicking my ass as I expect it to be. Hopefully, around November--when my one-week break is gonna be--I'll be able to continue writing Sora's backstory which is quite long lol. Anyways, thank you for the continuous support 
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47701013a

@AestheticWeeb801  I don't know what you think or if I helped you, but give me your opinion and from there we could refine it or come up with more alternatives.And I'm sorry for the long message; it was complicated to explain, and unfortunately, Wattpad deleted the private messages where you could write more than just the 2000-word limit.  Remember, you have all the tools and possibilities at your disposal; it's an AU, and now everything is under your control. You are the master/mistress of this reality, and in it, whatever you want happens. Anyway And of course, in the end, the course of your story lies within you, and I know it will be great, just as you have done a good and entertaining job so far, that's what I wanted to tell you. Again, I apologize if I'm interrupting you in the middle of something important, and I hope everything is going well with whatever else you're doing, like your studies or social or family life. And don't forget, I'm here to help with anything, both in your literary work and anything outside of that. I hope to hear new news from you, I wish you luck in everything, stay strong and don't give up.
            Warm regards.
Balas

47701013a

a good chapter 5 of "what if"
          
          Keep going until the end with perseverance and with the time you need please, I am supporting you 
          Thank you for your work!!!

AestheticWeeb801

New chapter is out! I know, I know. The "first half" may have caught some of you off guard but if i included the second half in one chapter, it would've been too long to the point most of y'all might start to lose interest. With that said, season 2 just came out so I might watch that first before releasing the second half of chapter 5. Anyways, hope y'all enjoy this one!

AestheticWeeb801

Two things: one, the first half of chapter 5 (yes, you heard it correctly) will be published tomorrow; two, what time and day(s) do you guys usually get on wattpad? I wanna make sure i release the chapters at a time that’s best for y’all (°▽°)

47701013a

@AestheticWeeb801  Yeah!!! Chapter 5 is tomorrow!!
            I am also attentive to everything, any part of the day tomorrow...
            Good luck just having a day off from work tomorrow!!!
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AestheticWeeb801

@nazuchan1 sweet. Good to know! Hope you’ll like the first half of ch. 5 tomorrow as it is leaning more on the slice of life spectrum 
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