Akira_diKallene

"Memories of a Happier Place' is very sweet. I like the overall calm feeling I get while reading the poems in there, and being gently swept along the story line. What I enjoy is the solid feeling of being of being an uninvolved third party. Your poetry is great  keep up the good work

AffanAliNajeeb

@Akitaka_Kurujin Thank you for your review :)
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Akira_diKallene

To AffanAliNajeeb, 
          If possible, I would like you to read my new story, which has about 3 medium-sized chapters. Can you please give me some advice, like is the story too hard to understand, or any other concerns it might raise. I'll read your works as well, and give you some critique if you choose. A reply would be appreciated. 
          Thanks
          Akitaka

Akira_diKallene

@AffanAliNajeeb Thank you very much, I'll read your works as well
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AffanAliNajeeb

@Akitaka_Kurujin that would be nice. I'll give it a read sometime :)
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Alphawolf_16

Hola! Would you pls follow me back and how about a read for a read bro?

AffanAliNajeeb

@nusaibahaider16 of course. I added it to my lib. Will read it and give you suggestions. And sure you can expect comments
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Alphawolf_16

Did you like it...you can comment anything or you can also give me ideas to make it better.. ☺
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