Hi um excuse me aren't you the author of 'fairytale love story' Carlos De Vil? If you are then hi you would probably won't remember me but I used to read your other Carlos De Vil fan fic love it so much and this version is much better than the last one you had, don't get me wrong you actually nailed the first try but this version is well improved but there's a small problem with the chapters wrong order for part three actually I found a similar problem in the first book too before it was discontinued can you please fix it?
Just wanted to let you know thank you