Africanauthor

Hey guys! I'm working on a new book 'The Alphas Songbird'. I'm going to try to make the chapters longer than Ravens Story to keep it more interesting. Speaking of Ravens Story, please read the sequal Katrinas Story! If it doesn't get 3 reads by Friday then I will take it down and repost once my writing improves.
          	
          	Luv ya puddins!

Africanauthor

Hey guys! I'm working on a new book 'The Alphas Songbird'. I'm going to try to make the chapters longer than Ravens Story to keep it more interesting. Speaking of Ravens Story, please read the sequal Katrinas Story! If it doesn't get 3 reads by Friday then I will take it down and repost once my writing improves.
          
          Luv ya puddins!

Africanauthor

I would like to know if anyone has any suggestions for Ravens Story. Anything will be appreciated. Don't be a silent reader.
          
          
          Luv ya puddin's!

Africanauthor

@Its_Bambi thanks for type suggestion. I'll take it into consideration
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_behind_the_mask

@Its_Bambi  
            I recently read your story, at first it was eh but now it's pretty interesting. I think maybe you should make something happen to make Raven go back to the orphanage. Like her father telling Lizzy something bad about Raven, making Joel suspicious and aware and sending her back to the orphanage. But then Lizzy will search for her because she doesn't believe them.  
            Dunno, just some idea :3
            Also if you don't mind reading my story as well, then that'd be great! If not then, I understand, I enjoyed your story.
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