@Its_Bambi
I recently read your story, at first it was eh but now it's pretty interesting. I think maybe you should make something happen to make Raven go back to the orphanage. Like her father telling Lizzy something bad about Raven, making Joel suspicious and aware and sending her back to the orphanage. But then Lizzy will search for her because she doesn't believe them.
Dunno, just some idea :3
Also if you don't mind reading my story as well, then that'd be great! If not then, I understand, I enjoyed your story.