Afsha Malik

Hey! If time permits then can you please read my recent story about 'Mistake A story of revenge' and give me feedback about how it's going?? (It'll encourage me a lot<3)

Hi!
          To the people who have recommended me their books but i am not able to read them and not able to tell how is the book.
          I am sorry i am busy little these days i promise when i am free i would read your story and tell you about it.
          And if anybody else want me to tell  them how there story is aur something else i am there for you .

Hey! Im sorry to message here. But, I’ve just updated my new suspense-filled thriller, The Shadows Among Us! Dive into the mystery, follow Jane Brooks as she unravels dark secrets, and experience the twists that will leave you breathless.
          
          Don’t miss out! Read the latest chapters, leave a comment, and don’t forget to vote. Your feedback means everything as the story unfolds—come be part of the thrill! 
          
          Please do support my story, your genuine support will mean a lot to me. ❤❤❤
          
          Here is the link.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/376877509?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=puresoulll09
          
          Thank you for your time ❤❤❤

Hey hope you are doing well 
          Do try my books
          You'll like it

Heyy! Sorry for intruding. I'm in the process of making a book but I'm honestly not sure if people think it's good or bad, so here I am, searching for feedback.
          
          Genre: Dark Romance, Low fantasy
          
          Summary: Aaliyah is born into a world where everyone bears a unique curse—some are doomed to never be loved, others face relentless rejection or emotional detachment. Happiness has always eluded her, with parents who kept her from any semblance of joy. But everything changes when she meets a group of friends—and when she meets him. She doesn't know where this new chapter leads to or how it ends, but she's way too addicted to turn back.
          
          ~To Be Your Curse
          
          Please let me know what you think if you give it a shot, good or bad, it'd mean the world to me❤️‼️. 
          Here's a link.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/376070714?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=WorkingPen
          
          Thank youu!

Heyyy<3
          
          I'm writing a new book called promises, im kind of new to this writting thing and I've only posted a few chapters soo would you take a look at my book and tell me is it's somethings missing or if I need to add anything to it and how you feel about my writing if it's terrible could you please tell me what I should to to improve it as I really enjoyed writting the few chapters and I really enjoyed writting it... So if you do have the time would you please check it out 
          
          and if you did like the book can you vote on all the chapters 
          
          and can you also follow me I'll also follow you back 
          
          Thanks for your time loveee<3